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Strawberries and Peroxide by ~DementedDoll:iconDementedDoll:



She lays there,
amongst a flood of peroxide.
Staring at the crumbling ceiling,
Linoleum floor cooling her back.
Strawberry scented violet hair,
flows out in waves, rippling the deadly fluid.
Eyes glaze over,
peroxide trickles from her mouth.
Lights flicker,
they dim.
Her skin glows a milky white as the stench of death
adds to the strawberry and peroxide scent.
Her face fixed in a mocking smile,
she does away with the world,
Leaving her wasted corpse...
leaving the faintest tint of...
Strawberries and peroxide...
©2004-2009 ~DementedDoll
:icondementeddoll:

Author's Comments

heh heh....yes...i wrote this after i came back from the hairdressers after dying my hair purple...well..only purple streaks but yeah...it smelled like strawberries and peroxide...so i wrote this...after having a vivid mental picture in my mind that is...of a corpse lying on the bathroom floor....so anyways...here ya go

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:iconrobbydoh:
Wow!Very descriptive,I could smell the room while reading this.Good job.
:iconkokitten:
Wicked kewl Brittz! I wuffles it mucho! < 3

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:rose: Don't cry because it's over...Smile because it happened. :rose:

:batty:<( ::Because saying I love you has nothing to do with meaning it :: ) :petting:
:iconpowerman519:
Thats so awesome you can describe things way better then me.
:icon1-ph34r-1:
x.x omg.. hee hee so cool ^^ good job xD

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Rawr! xD!!!

~ 1-ph34r-1
:icondementeddoll:
nah..ur poems are amazing too...like i said..they rhyme..ty though! :hug: :kiss: mwah!
:icontoymachine11:
well written!! :D

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| the l o v e you can`t have |
| lasts the l o n g e s t |
| feels the s t r o n g e s t |
| and h u r t s the m o s t |



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April 13, 2004
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