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Forgiveness does not come cheap the second time around.
Once,
The first,
the finely spun tale was believed;
was accepted.
And friendship blossomed between us again.
The inevitable happened once more.

The excuses and the lies that you told.
You said them so sincerely,
you probably believed them yourself.
But the excuses were for my ears,
alone.
They were not needed for friend number 2, 3 and 4.
Only for this one.
The supposed friend number one.

I always have to learn to trust anew,
because of people like you.
I always get let down.
Being used,
dejected
and left on my own.
I have no tears left to spend on you the second time around.

So drive over one last time.
Exchange our boxes of past memories.
If I dont have those things to look at,
I wont ever have to think of you.
©2005-2009 ~DementedDoll
:icondementeddoll:

Author's Comments

For fucks sake...nothing to do with the Simple Plan song because that would be just plain stupid. Plus...Simple Plan is just horrendous music. Anyways...this song was written by me, all teary-eyed and depressed about a friend. It was going to be titled "Scar Tissue" but THAT RCHP song has sentimental values...and..*shrugs* didnt seem right after awhile. So yeah. I couldnt think up a title for this. Usually they just come to me once I finish writing the poem. This time nothing came.

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:iconairmega23:
I really like this poem, but I really don't like untitled! I read your description, and I understand your problems with the title, so thats okay. One title that kind of stuck out to me for this piece would have been "second time"; meh, its not that great, but its a start!:P

Great Job!

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To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
:icondementeddoll:
Hm. I think Ill think of that. Maybe..like.. "No Forgiveness Anew" type-thing? I dont know...I'll have to work on it. ;) Thanks for the comment and Im glad you liked it. *skips off to comment on your shtuff* ^_~

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Drip...Drip...A sink full of blood...A human hanging up above....Drip...Drip...Out of sight....Always in the night....
:blackrose: :skullbones:
:iconairmega23:
:)
No problem dear! :)

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To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
:icondeadlywitch:
Miss you hunny..!
I love your words, but i guess the title isn't the correct...
:blowkiss:

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Be always like the Moon, that besides be solitary, she never stops shining...
:icondementeddoll:
Yep..back again..after awhile of not being here. Im glad j00 missed me. ^_____^ :heart: :kiss: and thank j00 for comment.

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Drip...Drip...A sink full of blood...A human hanging up above....Drip...Drip...Out of sight....Always in the night....
:blackrose: :skullbones:
:icondeadlywitch:
Are you ok dear ? *****

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Be always like the Moon, that besides be solitary, she never stops shining...
:icondementeddoll:
Yup..Im feeling better now. Thanks for asking. ^_^

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Drip...Drip...A sink full of blood...A human hanging up above....Drip...Drip...Out of sight....Always in the night....
:blackrose: :skullbones:

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